Does this resume point make sense?
Mar-10-2010 By
- Increased productivity and partner-client relations via application of updated system of data organization
Im trying to say productivity and partner client relations was increased because of the use of a new organization system, namely email (which my boss never used before) and Jott, which is a voice to text phone service and some other electronic systems. I pretty much set up and entered all data into both. What I wrote seems wordy and confusing can anyone help me? Thanks!
The following reply is by : Hipto :
Increased productivity and partner-client relations via introduction and application of technology based systems.
When they ask you about it, then explain what you did.
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Yes it does.
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Actually it isn’t confusing & is quite good.
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Updated office data systems to increase productivity and improve client relations
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Increased productivity and partner-client relations via introduction and application of technology based systems.
When they ask you about it, then explain what you did.
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It’s a little nerdy, but not bad. But…it’s too vague. Could you be more specific in how much you helped productivity, by either % or $?
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